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All Through The Night (Chapter 12)

The sound of a shot inside the house brought Heath to his feet. He had hauled Pinto into the guest room and then wondered where to hide him. The armoire might have accommodated the unconscious man,...

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I don't know how you managed it, but the action going on so quickly did not hinder you from helping us hear Heath's thoughts and feel what he was feeling (smell what he was smelling!) as the chapter...

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Wow, it wasn't until the end of the chapter that I realized I'd been holding my breath.Great writing PoP !!!Hurry back !!!Laura

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Wow, I could feel exactly what Heath was feeling! Good chapter - will Nick and Jarrod arrive in time? Hurry back!Karen

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May I echo "WOW" I didn't know I could hold my breath that long. Having one of the shoot "Silas" made them all the more evil, if that were possible.

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I think I feel as dizzy as Heath! (Maybe it is because I forgot to breathe throughout this chapter!)

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Deep breath, deep breath - that was so tense I too was holding my breath. Please hurry back with more, in the meantime I will keep on taking deep breaths.Excellent writing.

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Somehow I doubt it was Silas who was shot. Remember, there were some of the older hands who stayed back at the ranch while the more able men left with the drive- hopefully it was one of them, and not...

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Again, we've probably all of us seen the episode your story is based on, but DAMN...this is good "behind the action" stuff that you've got going here!

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I think I passed out from holding my breath!! WOW what a chapter & what a writer!!!Lisa

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Nerve wracking chapter and so descriptive. i lived every moment with Heath. Now help our boy get to the barn so they scan wait for Nick and Jarrod to get there.

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I don't think I drew a single breath while I was reading that! fantastic!

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Still hoping (but not necessarily expecting) that the sheriff and crew are at this very moment surrounding the ranch. What a great chapter, filled with action and tension.

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That was nail-biting stuff! The original episode certainly didn't get me as wired up. Amazing action sequence!Are Jarrod and Nick going to get there in time or is it up to the Vic and company to the...

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YIPES!!! Now things are REALLY heating up and poor Heath is getting worse and worse...collapse is imminent. Oh where the heck are Jarrod and Nick?!!!

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HOLY MOLY! You trying to kill us, girl? Cause I for one am not too sure that they'd find if they checked my pulse or blood presssure about now.-polly-

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Re: All Through The Night (Chapter 12)

Very descriptive writing. You definitely know how to hold our attention. Heath is portrayed perfectly. Hurry back! Christy

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He's gotta make it to the barn?!! Wonderfully descriptive writing left me in no doubt as to what was happening and to whom...and I loved listening to Heath's thoughts as he fought against Copper! Now,...

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